Sunday, March 29, 2009

WHY CANT I RHYME

I have always loved to compose songs and make music with my limited knowledge of music. Once I decided to write a song and forcing myself and my mental faculties I sat to write a song. But, I was a complete faliure. I threw crushed papers all around and finally started thinking. With frustration and anger the question which came in my mind was "What's the reason I can't rhyme". I suddenly got a devils smile on my face and then......

I HAVE A QUESTION IN MY MIND
WHAT’S THE REASON I CANT RHYME

THERE ARE PEOPLE DYING AROUND ME
THERE ARE CHILDREN CRYING AROUND ME
BUT WHEN I SIT TO WRITE
MY ROOM IS SO SURPIRSED
THUS THE QUESTION COMES IN MY MIND
WHATS THE REASON I CAN’T RHYME.

THOSE JUMBLED THOUGHTS COME AGAIN
WHICH CAUSE ME QUITE SOME MENTAL STRAIN
EVEN AFTER SPENDING HOURS TOGETHER
I COULDN’T WRITE A SONG
THUS THE QUESTION COMES IN MY MIND
WHATS THE REASON I CANT RHYME.

SMOKING CIGARETTES WITH ASH ALL AROUND
THERE IS A PHRASE WHICH I HAVE FOUND
BUT TRAVELLING FROM MY BRAIN TO PEN
MY THOUGHTS HAVE TURNED AROUND
THUS THE QUESTION COMES IN MY MIND
WHATS THE REASON I CANT RHYME.

2 comments:

  1. for finding rhyming words use a software called VersePerfect and Rhyme from AnalogX....they both are free s/w.

    - nirmal

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  2. A thought may not rhyme...when u start finding rhythm in writing u lose originality..whats important is original flow of thoughts, which may or may not rhyme or you lose on the originality part...

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